Zero to Illo Challenge Portfolio Piece #1

Okay, so I've fallen behind a little bit this past week, but here is the sketch for my first portfolio piece for the Zero to Illo Challenge.  This is a sketch I created for an SCBWI workshop that I attended a while back where we had to illustrate a scene from a fairy tale.  I made changes on Goldilocks, and if you look closely, you can see what I've erased.  I combined 2 scans as the sketch is kind of large, so please excuse the quality of the image.

I welcome your critiques and suggestions.  More sketches to come!